not bad man, I like the way the render works in the piece. As for crit, the perspective is very straight, forward, and centered, as is your background. you could tilt either of the two just slightly and make the image more lively. to see what I'm saying think of the center circle as an aim point and the map in the background upper blue building while I'm dancing left and right dodging your bullets :]
I know the focus and composition could be better, believe me I tried. But if I wanted to do that I'd have to start all over, and I've done that but the result wasn't quite thesame..
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not bad man, I like the way the render works in the piece. As for crit, the perspective is very straight, forward, and centered, as is your background. you could tilt either of the two just slightly and make the image more lively. to see what I'm saying think of the center circle as an aim point and the map in the background upper blue building while I'm dancing left and right dodging your bullets :]
thanks mate